Valia Atreya

[Valentine]

Name: Valia Atreya (The blind lord)
Race: Vampire
Gender: Male
Age: 3365
Class: Assassin
Alignment: Neutral

Personal Stats:
Body Build: Tall and slim
Distinguishing Features: Black, shoulder length hair, narrow nose, haunting grey eyes, very pale skin and thin lips.
Clothes: Long black coat that is fastened by four silver hooks. The coat is undone at waist length for mobility. Under his cloak he wears a thick padded under coat and on his legs he wears black trousers. His scabbard is worn on his back.
History: Valia was born a Vampire. After a few years of his birth, he bit his mother in an argument. He drew enough blood from her to be fatal. His father, enraged beyond belief, attacked him, only to be slain by Valia as well. Valia was then alone. He wandered streets by night, preying on animals and stray drunks. He managed to sustain himself for a long time on this diet, but eventually his hunger forced him to drink more. He began combat against fully-grown elves, and human’s, slaughtering them. At this time he became a ferocious fighter, and forged four pieces of finger armour for himself. On the first night he wore them, his victim begged for mercy. He laughed so hard that the young man was able to run away. He named his new weapons after that word to remind himself of his weakness. A few centuries later, he found others like him, Vampires. He called to them from the shadows and formed The Blood Creed. As the leader of this pack, Valia decided he needed a weapon that could be feared. He forged a sword- Atreya’s curse. He used a vampire-mage to spell this sword with the powers of the loss of speech and sight. Through wielding this sword he became know as the Blind Lord. He was presented with a necklace (see below).
Battle Stats:
Class Description: Slinks through the shadows to his prey. When he comes across one, he either uses his knife to slit their throat, his finger armour to the same effect, or runs them through with his sword.
Armour: Other than four pieces of finger armour, none.
Weapons: Sword and knife.
Accessories: Necklace of the blood creed. This necklace shows any who behold it that the wearer is a member of the blood creed and it's wearer's power. Brief cowardice in enemies.
Strengths: Good swordsman and practically silent.
Flaws/Weaknesses: Not very adept in the magical arts, drains himself very quickly, awful shot with a bow. His lack of concern for others make him a very dis-loyal ally, to any other than his blood creed brothers.
Extra Abilities/Magic: Valia, being a vampire, can fly.
Other Info: none
Element: Blood
Likes: the taste of blood, slaughtering his enemies, fighting large groups.
Dislikes: Weakness, magic, elves.
Allies: The blood creed.
Family: No biological, though the blood creed could be called family.

Custom Weapons
Names: Atreya’s Curse & Mercy
Description: Atreya’s Curse- This sword leaves those stricken by it incapable of speech and sight, that is if you survive.
Mercy- Four pieces of razor sharp finger armour used for slashing at enemy, renting deep wounds into a foe’s armour and punching through metals. Also used for slitting an unsuspecting throat. Worn on right hand.
Power: Already stated.

[Akkarin]

In short, there doesnt seem to be any real weakness here, as a Vampire your primary weakness is you cannot walk win the sun, yet your amulet stops that from happening, to me he sounds to powerful.
Tone him down a bit
Character Pending

[Valentine]

On a second read through i agree with you, should i change the ability of the amulet? And i think no magic or bows is a pretty good weakness as it effectively nulifies ling range attacks.

[Akkarin]

Agreed, Vampires are a character i like to make hard for people to approve, two reasons ive had one,i begun playing on Play-by-post sites as one.
Secondly; there over done, so i like to keep them to a high standard.

So Yeah sort this out and ill take another look over it

[Valentine]

Ive changed the necklaces' description and given him another flaw.

[Valentine]

Coughcoughcough

[Valentine]

I see that another character has benn approved but mine still not so, what is wrong?

[The Deficient Seraph]

I am going to say approved.
I am not sure what akkarin thinks, but I didnt want to interfer since it was him talking to you about it.
Temp. Approval until Akkarin says otherwise.

[Valentine]

Ah good, i can get on with using him, for the moment.

[Akkarin]

Your lucky DS is going to take over me whislt i no longer have internet Connection for the forseeable future, people who ask questions like.
"Why are you taking so long"
usually Dont have their character approved at all...
Perhaps we'd like to consider other people having problems and if they dont a social life or requirement that doesnt require them to sit on a computer....Now then...
Approved